Eragon Dissection
The following is my detailed breakdown and analysis of Eragon by Christopher Paolini. Some of what I write here may seem critical. Please know that I am attempting to be objective in my analysis, and that some of the things I put here are purely my opinion. Please know also that however things written here may come across, they should in no way be used as a measure for how I feel toward this wonderful man or his works.
(Chapter One) Prologue: Shade of Fear
(Chapter Three) Palancar Valley
(Chapter Eight) A Name of Power
(Chapter Ten) Strangers in Carvahall
(Chapter Eleven) Flight of Destiny
(Chapter Twelve) The Doom of Innocence
(Chapter Fourteen) The Madness of Life
(Chapter Fifteen) A Rider’s Blade
(Chapter Sixteen) Saddlemaking
(Chapter Seventeen) Therinsford
(Chapter Eighteen) Thunder Roar and Lightning Crackle
(Chapter Nineteen) Revelation at Yazuac
(Chapter Twenty) Admonishments
(Chapter Twenty-One) Magic is the Simplest Thing
(Chapter Twenty-Three) Through a Dragon’s Eye
(Chapter Twenty-Four) A Song for the Road
(Chapter Twenty-Five) A Taste of Teirm
(Chapter Twenty-Six) An Old Friend
(Chapter Twenty-Seven) The Witch and the Werecat
(Chapter Twenty-Eight) Of Reading and Plots
(Chapter Twenty-Nine) Thieves in the Castle
(Chapter Thirty) A Costly Mistake
(Chapter Thirty-One) Vision of Perfection
(Chapter Thirty-Two) Master of the Blade
(Chapter Thirty-Three) The Mire of Dras-Leona
(Chapter Thirty-Four) Trail of Oil
(Chapter Thirty-Five) Worshipers of Helgrind
(Chapter Thirty-Six) The Ra’zac’s Revenge
(Chapter Thirty-Seven) Murtagh
(Chapter Thirty-Eight) Legacy of a Rider
(Chapter Thirty-Nine) Diamond Tomb
(Chapter Forty) Capture at Gil’ead
(Chapter Forty-One) Du Sundavar Freohr
(Chapter Forty-Two) Fighting Shadows
(Chapter Forty-Three) A Warrior and a Healer
(Chapter Forty-Four) Water from Sand
(Chapter Forty-Five) The Ramr River
(Chapter Forty-Six) The Hadarac Desert
(Chapter Forty-Seven) A Path Revealed
(Chapter Forty-Eight) A Clash of Wills
(Chapter Forty-Nine) Flight Through the Valley
(Chapter Fifty)
(Chapter Fifty-One)
(Chapter Fifty-Two)
(Chapter Fifty-Three)
(Chapter Fifty-Four)
(Chapter Fifty-Five)
(Chapter Fifty-Six)
(Chapter Fifty-Seven)
(Chapter Fifty-Eight)
(Chapter Fifty-Nine)
(Chapter Sixty)
(Chapter One) Prologue: Shade of Fear
Both Durza and the Urgals are introduced here right away. They are the main villains of this book and the effects of them carry on through the entire series.
Although Durza is introduced, we do not yet know his name.
Durza is described in one sentence.
The Urgals are described in two sentences.
We see “the shade’s” scratched blade. This particular detail will be relevant later, although it really isn’t important to the story.
The way Chris writes this sections shows us what Durza is like.
The detail “swan feather fletching” jumps out at me. This is likely because we will in later books see more swan feathers used by the elves. I like the thought and consistency put into these tiny details
Unbeknownst to us, we see Faolin. Faolin is not a character in this book, but will be important in later books in the series.
We already get to see magic being used. This prologue really tells you what you are getting into with this book. You know what you are being sold right out of the gate.
Arya (whose name we do not yet know) screams when she sees her guards fall. We will learn more about this, along with Faolin, in later books, but not this one. I like when something in the very first chapter is important later, like in other books. How many of these fine details are planned from the start, and how many are simply used later despite not having that original intent?
In this prologue Chris sets up the villains, the love intrest / ally, sends the egg (which is the only reason we have a story), and sprinkles in a lot of minor plot points like Faolin.
I noticed Chris uses a lot of adjectives. We are normally taught to avoid writing with a lot of adjectives, but it obviously worked out okay for Chris. While this is taught, I do firmly believe there are no real rules about writing.
We get shown Durza’s character when he “…quenched the fires in his path but left the rest to burn.”
Eragon is written in third person following Eragon. This all gets mixed up in a great way in the second book though, when Chris follows other characters with Eragon absent.
(Chapter Two) Discovery
We meet Eragon. The first word is literally “Eragon”.
Chris uses so many adjectives; “silvery cloud” and “ruddy light”. This is why I feel like there are no rules for what can make a best selling book.
Eragon gets a five sentence paragraph describing him. This description is rather basic and somewhat dry.
The spine gets set up as superstitiously feared. We learn far more about why in this book, and later ones. I don’t even think Chris had thought of the things about the spine that he put in Murtagh at the time of writing Eragon. It works though. He kind of left himself room to play in the future by leaving some of his world clouded in superstition and mystery. Clever.
Chris has a map. I want a map in my book.
We learn that Eragon’s family is poor.
The “stone” (the egg) ruins Eragon’s hunt.
Technically we meet Saphira here in a way.
Eragon realizes that the “stone” must have been sent there by magic. He recalls to treat magic and its users with caution.
This first chapter is really the event that sets the whole story in motion, hand in hand with the prologue. I suppose this is more than the prologue in the sense that Eragon didn’t have to take the egg.
(Chapter Three) Palancar Valley
King Galbatorix is mentioned. This is the main villain of the original Inheritance Cycle.
“Stories were still told about how half of his army disappeared after marching into its [the Spine’s] ancient forest.” We learn more about this in book three.
Eragon can hear the Igualda falls as he nears the village. These falls, or rather their history, will be important soon.
For some reason I feel like the writing here is way better than in the Prologue. I am not sure why.
Therinsford and Utgard are mentioned. Chris has his world created and references it right away. It doesn’t feel forced though, it all is within context.
Eragon attempts to barter with the “stone” he found. Despite the insane odds that set this story in motion, Chris balances it on a knife’s edge here, “almost” sending the egg off and ending the story.
Sloan suggests waiting to barter with the traders, who we will meet later.
Sloan’s dislike of all Spine related things is all but spelled out for us. This is an important point in book two.
We meet Katrina. Although not super important in this book, she will be very important in the remaining books, especially two and three.
After bartering with the “stone” fails, Eragon tries to give it to Horst. If only this ignant kid knew what he had…
So, isn’t it normal to have dialogue be on its own line? Chris has some of Eragon’s dialogue in the middle of a paragraph…It works, it doesn’t seem out of place, but it struck me as odd.
Roran is mentioned. He is a huge part of the story, starting in the next book.
Chris came up with a reason why they live out of town. Let’s be real here though, they HAD to live out of town. There is no way Eragon could have kept the dragon in town, so for the sake of the story, Chris had to come up with a decent-ish reason why they didn’t live in town.
I love what Chris does in this chapter. Eragon, Garrow, and Roran are all so worried about things, their lives, and NONE of it will matter very quickly. He makes them real, with real concerns that fit their situation, even though it will all be upturned before what they are worried about can come to pass.
Garrow explains about Sloan’s wife and the Igualda Falls.
Chris has yet to explain why Eragon lives with his uncle. So far he is just writing as if this is completely normal. Garrow says, “Before you were brought here…” and that is it.
(Chapter Four) Dragon Tales
Any of you guys watch that cartoon on PBS called Dragon Tales?
You can tell Eragon is poor. If you couldn’t tell before this, then you should be able to now by what is in his room. Good job reinforcing the character with a description of his stuff Chris! It is funny though…Soon he will have almost none of this stuff, and after that happens owning things will take a different meaning…He won’t want for anything… He can have almost anything he wants, but everything he gets he pays for by putting his life on the line.
We learn about Eragon’s mother, Selena, and that she left Eragon there with Garrow.
We learn that Eragon doesn’t know who is father is. This is a huge plot point! It carries on through…I think book 3…Actually it even has some effect in the fourth.
We meet Roran. He gets a one sentence description.
Chris makes 9 days pass in one sentence.
The way Chris describes the traders tells us that something is amiss. It is at the same time a bad omen for Eragon, and foreshadowing for us.
Belatona is mentioned. We don’t get to this particular city until book 4.
It is worth saying again. Chris does not spoon feed us. Names and places are discussed casually, with no explanation as if it is for the character rather than for the reader. The reader will catch on, that is what they want. That’s how Chris does it, that’s how Rowling does it, and its worked out pretty well so far.
The trader locks up his goods before leaving. This is Chris showing us the trader’s distrust, not telling us.
The trader tells of Urgals and a shade, as well as bad luck and whatnot. All things that are VERY important. As of now, they are just rumors and may be dismissed as such. We have no idea at this point how true they are. This seemingly harmless conversation tells so much about what will happen in this book, but we don’t know that on a first read!
Dragon Riders are mentioned.
There is definitely enough info at this point to piece together where the story is going, but barely. I doubt that 99.9% of readers would be able to guess it on a first read. This calculated amount of information is what makes me want to keep reading.
Brom is mentioned as a friend of Eragon’s. Oh boy, if only we knew…
Again, this chapter seems so much better written than the prologue… Is this just me? Do I just have some hangup with the prologue or something?
The Varden have been mentioned a few times now, and with no explanation yet.
We start to see the political division of Galbatorix and the Varden.
The traders in the tavern show no respect for the boy Eragon, but the villagers who know him have his back full on.
Now Chris tells us about the Varden. Not in a conversation, and it doesn’t even feel like Eragon recalling. It does seem filtered through his perspective, but it is really just Chris telling us. It seems to fit though. It would have been hard to work this information in any other way and have it not feel forced.
Roran speaks his concern about Sloan. “There will be blood between us when he finds out about Katrina and me.” This. Is. Foreshadowing.
Brom gets two-ish sentences of description.
“His [Brom’s] gaze lingered on Eragon last of all.” Bum Bum Bum, foreshadowing. I love these little breadcrumbs. The ones you don’t notice the first time.
Chris gets us Galbatorix’s and the riders’ history, as well as the latter’s fall, through Brom’s storytelling to the village. This may be a tad cliche, but it fits perfect here, and it works.
This is not specific to this chapter, but it is when I thought of it. Galbatorix at some point sought to destroy the Urgals…like all of them. Eragon also at some point in this series has similar feelings and thoughts.
Brom has an uncanny amount of detail about Galbatorix’s fall into madness. We should suspect he knows more than he lets on, that this is not just a story to him. Good job Chris.
In Brom’s story we see the first time Galbatorix’s words were wielded as a weapon. We will learn that words are his greatest weapon.
Thirteen bad guy goons. Because 13 is an unlucky number. I don’t think this is a coincidence, is it Chris?
We learn, by subtle mention, that the elves do not leave their place anymore.
(Chapter Five) Fate’s Gift
For a two page chapter, this one is pretty loaded. This short chapter is where he goes from farm boy to rider.
Eragon tests the egg alone in his room. Is this the first time he touches it without gloves on??? I will have to check…
We go from “thought he heard a squeak” during the day to being woken up by a squeak two paragraphs later.
We meet, the as of yet unnamed, Saphira.
(Chapter Six) Awakening
“…it was dignified and noble.” Chris already knows what his dragons are like and can describe them in great detail well before we ever understand what they are like.
The dragon gets the longest description yet, but it is not too much. I believe this is justified, since the reader knows what humans are like, but the reader does not know what the dragons are like or how they look.
Chris describes a gap in the dragon’s spikes. We will later be shown what this is for, although a very an astute reader could probably already piece this together knowing that people used to ride dragons.
“He fell back with a wild cry.” Um… why didn’t Roran or Garrow come check out what was going on? (Saphira must have used magic, duh.)
I love the way Chris describes what happens after Eragon touches the dragon. He had to describe a feeling that was completely made up, the feeling of a dragon’s magic altering Eragon’s being.
We see the first instance of Eragon’s new mental abilities; the ability to leave his own mind. This section is very well written.
Chris compares the dragon to a cat. This is purposeful and goes back to Chris knowing what these creatures are like before he wrote them.
Chris uses a lot of similes. If I recall correctly, it is generally accepted that writers with more experience would replace these with metaphors.
Eragon sits and thinks about, almost over thinks about, the implications of keeping the dragon. Perhaps this is part of why I like this series and Chris so much, because I tend to overthink stuff too. Chris seems to overthink things and you can see him hash it all out in his writing, so we can see that he thought of everything. Perhaps overthink is the wrong word here, but I hope I got my point across. Maybe I am just overthinking it…
Eragon already knows he will protect and care for the dragon despite the consequences. And oh boy will there be consequences.
I think it is funny that Eragon keeps calling the dragon an it, and referring to it like it is just an animal. Chris even puts in “After all, it’s only an animal.” We will learn that this is so not the case.
Roran does mention hearing noises in the night. Maybe Eragon’s “wild cry” was more of an internal one.
The fact that this all happened right at the beginning of winter feels like a “manufactured coincidence.” It allows Eragon to spend a lot of time with the dragon. Had it been summer he would have had too much work to do, and it would have been far more likely the dragon would have been discovered since less people roam around in winter. The Spine is also convenient, allowing the dragon to hunt. Their house being out of town, convenient. All this seems to be built to support the story. Bear in mind, I only noticed this when I began this project. Since the egg comes “long after” the rest is the first time reader probably doesn’t even notice the engineered convenience. If it was any easier, or worked out any better, perhaps the reader would reject it.
Eragon begins to worry about the dragon’s lack of fire. This carries through to the end of the book, and is very important in the end.
Chris answered all of the right questions here; wouldn’t there be signs of the dragon? footprints, scratch marks, giant poops?
The evidence of the dragon gives Eragon the desire to reveal the dragon to Garrow and Roran.
Eragon makes plans that will never be fulfilled. Fate steps in. This reminds me of all of their concerns they have, like preparing food for winter, even though none of it will matter soon. Man does this remind me of real life.
The dragon “says” (brains? transmits? thinks?) her first word.
“…he did not think of the dragon as an animal.” Remember? From earlier! He learned and changed his thinking!
This chapter is about the transition from “just an animal” to “more than just an animal”.
(Chapter Seven) Tea For Two
Chris describes Brom more here, a micro info dump.
Brom’s ring is seen by Eragon and described as he sees it. This ring is important later, why else would Chris bother describing it?
This is the point when I realized, the story is filtered through Eragon’s perspective and perception.
Chris puts a lot of dialogue inside paragraphs…is this normal? Because I feel like I haven’t ever noticed it in other books…
“Brom had bought a house in Carvahal nearly 15 years ago and had lived there ever since.”Here we get an indirect clue that Brom is Eragon’s father, worded in a way that makes it not obvious.
Chris gets us world building information through Eragon’s questions.
We are shown one of Eragon’s personality traits: he asks a lot of questions.
We learn form Brom that the first rider was named Eragon…and that he found an egg and raised it in secret…Ironic, huh? This may sound cheesy just reading it here, but I like that Chris did this. There is no such thing as a coincidence in a novel, just things that are written to appear as such, so why not have fun with it? This does come back later when Eragon learns more from the dwarves.
“…except the elves, and fortune would have to smile greatly upon you before you talked with one.” Foreshadowing. Like, this is actually very funny, because the first elf he meets he rescues from the brink of death in a prison and then first talks to her through a mental link because she is unconscious…
“If any dragons beside Shruikan are still alive, they have hidden themselves so they will never be found by the empire.” BIG time foreshadowing here, and I never realized it until this read.
Chris lays down so much vague foreshadowing in this chapter. I highly doubt most people would pick it up on a first read.
Eragon worries about how this dragon will change his body/life. It ends up being more the dragons rather than his dragon that does this.
Brom straight up lies to Eragon so much in this chapter. He almost has to though.
Eragon gives away that something is up with all of his questions and his strangely accurate knowledge of obscure dragon and rider related things. We see Brom get suspicious, but we don’t yet know that Brom has an idea of what is going on.
(Chapter Eight) A Name of Power
Here we learn of Roran meeting the man from Therinsford. This sets up Roran to be away when the Razac come. Else he would be dead.
We learn that Roran wants to marry Katrina, and we see the first hints that Eragon doesn’t like this, probably just because it is a big change.
When Eragon gets back to the dragon it says “Eragon.” He asks if that is all it can say and it says “Yes.” I found this rather funny. It is probably just my dad joke sense of humor though.
Now, at the end of this chapter, the dragon has a name. Saphira.
(Chapter Nine) A Miller To Be
Their lives are changing, but this course of change will get slammed into and overrun by another.
Eragon decided to wait to reveal Saphira to his family. Waiting for the right time. Because, you know, “the right time” always happens.
Up until now, this story hasn’t jumped any large time gaps.
(Chapter Ten) Strangers in Carvahall
“…would be the last time he saw them together for many months.” Eragon is referring to Garrow and Roran. Little does he know this is the last time he would ever see them together.
Garrow tells his fatherly advice to both boys, not just Roran, as if he knew…
As they leave for town, the two young men look back at the farm as if it were their last time to see it….as if they knew…
We can plainly see how upset Eragon is about Roran leaving, we could really see this ever since Roran met Dempton the miller.
Horst secretly warns Eragon to get rid of the blue stone, on account of the two men who arrived asking about it.
We can see through the few interactions with Horst that he truly is a good man.
“Well…I guess this is the last time we will see each other for a few months,” Roran tells Eragon. To which Eragon replies, “I’m sure it won’t seem that long.” HA.
They go about things as normal, because they don’t know what is about to happen. This sounds simple, but it is important.
Eragon goes and looks for the men that Horst warned him about, rather than leave town as he should. This is another trait of Eragon’s.
We see Sloan’s true colors as he sells our Eragon.
Eragon is under the false assumption that the two men are, or are working with, whoever sent the egg.
This all goes back to how this story is filtered through Eragon’s perspective. He is working off the information he has, which does not include the prologue.
The Ra’zac get four sentences of description.
Brom “coincidentally” arrives to save Eragon.
Brom pretends he was searching for Eragon to see if he remembered the trader’s name.I think Brom knows WAY more than he is letting on here.
Brom removes Eragon’s glove and forces a look at Eragon’s dragon mark on his hand. Brom totally knows man. He walks away whistling.
(Chapter Eleven) Flight of Destiny
Eragon decides to find Saphira before confronting Garrow. Saphira takes Eragon away. Far Away. This was a grave mistake that cost much, but also no doubt saved their lives.
There is nothing Eragon can do to stop Saphira, he must simply endure.
Chris maintains very consistent with how he writes the mental abilities of this characters, and I feel like it starts here with Eragon trying to worm his way into Saphira’s mind while she is flying.
I like that Chris thought through what would happen if someone flew a dragon without a saddle.
One would like to think that a dragon and rider’s first flight would be a magical moment, but in reality it is awkward and terribly unromantic, like two teenagers having sex for the first time.
Everything really moved rather slowly until this moment, when Saphira kidnaps Eragon. From here the story moves at a swifter pace.
How uncharacteristic of Saphira to flee in fear. Perhaps her shame at this moment is what drives her to never do so in the future. Perhaps she did so now because she knew how powerful the Ra’zac are and knew they were too inexperienced to hold their own. Perhaps it was purely animal instinct fear.
(Chapter Twelve) The Doom of Innocence
When he wakes up, Eragon realizes that the place Saphira had brought him was the place her egg had appeared during his hunt. This is beautifully fitting. It also gives us a glimpse at the difference between human walking speed and dragon flight speed. What took Eragon 3 days on foot took Saphira hours on wing.
I just stumbled upon this in my hand written notes, “The thought sections are not italics as I assumed, they appear to be an entirely different font.” Want to hear something funny? I completely forgot about this until I read it again, then I looked, and sure enough, it looks like it is a completely different font rather than italics. This is not that important, just interesting.
“Even a shade would run from you!” Eragon tells this to Saphira…we will later learn that this is not true…
Upon returning home they find that the worst has happened, the farm was razed in their absence.
Eragon is angry at Saphira, his life partner.
These two think fairly clearly in a crisis, as is shown here. I suppose they would be pretty bad heroes if they couldn’t.
Eragon throws caution to the wind in his attempt to save Garrow. He doesn’t even care if Saphira is seen.
I wonder if Garrow knew that Brom was Eragon’s father…
(Chapter Thirteen) Deathwatch
Eragon sees the dream/premonition of the “final scene”. I really really like the idea of this, to have the final seen hinted at in the first book, however…this really limits you. I know that Chris had to do some finagling to get this to work out since as he was writing, things took a different path. So be careful if you decide to do this.
We see how the hero needs the help of others, how he cannot do this alone. This is important.
Eragon forgot all about Roran with everything that happened.
Eragon is given false hope that Garrow will recover.
(Chapter Fourteen) The Madness of Life
Garrow dies. We see some of the customs of the people of Carvahall.
Eragon has real human emotions, like jealousy and envy, the kind of emotions we humans try to hide. We see these emotions in Eragon when Katrina says that she wished to call him father one day.
We learn that Katrina also wants to marry Roran.
Eragon has a breakdown, and again requires the aid of others, this time comforting.
(Chapter Fifteen) A Rider’s Blade
This chapter’s title seems to be here too quickly. Surely much more happens between Garrow’s death and getting Zarroc? I’ll chalk it up to good writing, he must cover a lot in this chapter.
I love the private conversations Eragon and Saphira can have, completely theirs.
For how old she is, Saphira is deep and wise. We later learn more that might let us assume this is due to the collective knowledge of the dragons, something they all share.
Saphira’s tracks are a good reinforcement of this decision to leave. The story supports itself, nothing feels forced.
Eragon steals hides to make a saddle for Saphira. Later, Brom will make the saddle for him (again, a hint that Brom knows way more than he is letting on), and in, I believe book four, Eragon repays Gedric the tanner.
Eragon takes a perverse pleasure in stealing from Sloan. He rationalizes the leather saying he will repay Gedric later, but he straight up calls it stealing when he takes meat from Sloan.
Brom shows up. On a second read we can deduce, but are never told, that he is always able to show up like this because of his training as a rider.
Eragon is very suspicious of Brom.
Brom talks to Saphira and convinces her to stay away as he speaks with Eragon.
Brom is packed and ready to go. He knew this was coming. Honestly, part of him has probably been itching for an adventure like this.
Brom knows how dangerous the Ra’zac are, why does he say that Eragon is up to the task of tracking them down to kill them? And of course this ultimately leads to his death. I mean, in book three Eragon and Roran have their work cut out for them when they fight the Ra’zac, and both are far more experienced at that point. Perhaps Brom never intends to let Eragon get that close…maybe it is all a ruse to train Eragon and get him to the Varden…That would make sense, it would be logical to seek out the Varden once they lost the Ra’zac’s trail.
Brom even left a note for Roran, he definitely made a darn good guess as to what Eragon was planning to do. I feel that if Brom had touched Eragon’s mind to find out Eragon would have known.
Eragon thinks he is tougher, more in control than he actually is, just like every other 15 year old boy.
Brom tears up at the sight of Saphira. We will learn why later. I can only imagine what Brom (if he was real) would have been feeling seeing Saphira. Man that would be a lot.
The story is written, and the characters act, as if all the past actually happened to them. Their lives are real to them.
Brom talks to himself when he sees Saphira. The things he says are so important, and mean so much on a second read. Even a first time reader can tell the words have deep meaning, they just don’t understand them yet.
“Was it loss, wonder, fear, envy?” in Brom’s voice…all of the above (or so we will learn.) I know I have said this about a hundred times, and I will probably say it about three hundred more, but I absolutely love these bits of words that have small meaning on the first read, and oh so much more meaning on subsequent reads.
“It takes a strong arm to pull that.” I have always found this phrase awkward, like a man complimenting a 5 year old boy…not sure why…
Brom disguises his wanting to travel with Eragon as wanting a good story.
Eragon is faced for the first time with what may be expected of him in his position, and as of now it all sounds unfathomable and foreign. He will discover through the books though, that he will do these things and why he will do them, after he struggles with these things and learns. It is part of his character arc.
Eragon gets Zaroc, which will be a rather large plot point in coming books, as well as this one, and a huge plot point in Murtagh, which comes after this tetralogy.
Brom mentions the secret forging methods of the elves, which we will see in great detail in book 3.
Brom says he doesn’t know what the name on the sword means. This is another of his bald faced lies. I am sure he has good intentions for his manipulation of Eragon, but I wonder why he thinks this is the right way to do things…
Brom explains that strange things happen around dragons, that even they don’t fully understand. Big time foreshadowing brah.
Brom describes the Ra’zac. Chris uses this method a lot in this first book to get info to the readers. Really, Eragon needs this info too, he is an illiterate farm boy when we meet him.
Brom is comparable to Gandalf. Except Brom doesn’t come back as Brom the white… He is like a “sleeper agent” like Gandalf, where he is a story teller with unknown powers.
Eragon finally gets to confide in someone.
Brom has a decent alibi, decent, not great, for not being able to save Garrow.
We get little bread crumbs in the form of Brom’s expressions, that upon looking back show his true feelings for Eragon and Saphira.
(Chapter Sixteen) Saddlemaking
Eragon is still burdened with Garrow’s death. Just like in real life, it fades slowly. By the end of the series, Garrow is not even thought of. I actually am not sure how much he is even mentioned after the first book…I want to say once or twice, but I am not sure.
Wow. Brom, just a spring of information for us ignoramuses.
Brom says he can make a saddle. He has said he won’t explain his life, but man does his knowledge raise some questions.
Eragon does not look forward to flying Saphira again after their first flight, and who can blame him? This will flip flop big time.
Brom may have deliberately sabotaged Eragon’s catching the Ra’zac by coming with and convincing Eragon to ride with him by horse.
The Ra'zac are minor villains over 3 books. I mean, they don’t last long in book 3, but their eggs even go past the Inheritance Cycle into Murtagh.
Brom points out that right and wrong are a matter of viewpoint. I wonder how much of the wisdom dispensed in this book Chris actually understood deep down as he was writing it.
Man, Brom keeps like…saying the plot, or at least parts of it. He literally tells us what “might” (does) happen, and first timers don’t even know.
(Chapter Seventeen) Therinsford
Eragon is wise, knowing a sword is almost useless to him until he learns to use one. I have always liked how wise Eragon is for his age.
I wonder, is Eragon wiser than most 15 year olds? I ask, because I totally would have wanted to wear the sword…He does mention not wanting the extra weight, which he would understand since he is a “backpacker”.
Brom and Eragon begin to track the Ra’zac.
Eragon swears he will return. He does of course, but probably not in the way he expects when at this point.
Brom explains more about the dragons, as well as the riders.
Brom refuses to divulge who the owner of Zaroc was.
Saphira is also very wise for her age. She has more of an excuse though, since she has the dragon magic memory.
Brom begins to train Eragon in swordplay. Eragon very arrogantly assumes Brom will be no match for him because he is old. So he gets a bit of 15 year old arrogance knocked out of him, and learns a valuable lesson about not judging a book by its cover. I do believe in later books he makes sure not to judge things by how they first look, and maybe it is because of this.
I do find it hard to believe that Brom would intentionally hit Eragon so hard in the head that he would black out, and then be like, “yer enemies won’t hold back.” Maybe it wasn’t intentional I suppose.
I am curious…How did they not run into Roran?
Eragon uses his mind on the horse, which is his first time on another being aside from Saphira.
Eragon sees Utgard, and the outpost built on it. This place is important, and we will learn more about it later. Brom explains that this is where Galbatorix slew Vrael, but not much else. We will learn more about it later.
Eragon confesses to Brom that he accidentally touched the horse’s mind, and that he didn’t know that was possible. Brom remarks that it is rare that someone in Eragon’s position and of his age can do such a thing. We learn throughout the series that both Eragon and Saphira are naturally talented at many things.
Eragon has never been this far from Carvahall.
I have always felt that Chris lost the seasons through this series, or at least this book. This goes hand in hand with me feeling the timeline is hard for me to grasp, like a wiggling fish with scales made of soap bars. Perhaps Alegasia has different things that govern the weather, but right now they walk on gravel and see a plain of brown grass, yet two days prior they were plowing through snow drifts. I know much of the later stuff takes place in the south, but during his trips to Elesmera we never see snow…Perhaps I just don’t understand the geography of Alegasia…I guess I am just saying that for me, despite the reason, this is something that felt like it lost continuity, if that is the right word…
(Chapter Eighteen) Thunder Roar and Lightning Crackle
Brom says the Ra’zac went to Yazuac.
Eragon believes that in less than a week he will be able to kill the Ra’zac, and with his bow! HA!
Brom “swears” using the word “brisingr” and the fire starts. This is the first magic word we get, the first magic word Eragon gets, and will end up being his favorite.
Brom cursing using the word brisingr is not made to seem funny, odd, out of place, or suspicious. We just think it is a funny curse word in this new world we are exploring. *Subtlety.
A whole day is passed in one paragraph.
Here we see what Chris had to see in order to be a good author. He had to know that a thunderstorm would be bad for a dragon to fly in, and then write it that way. It wasn’t something he realized part way through the series, you have to know these things right away.
We see the struggles and danger of wind to a dragon.
This chapter was all travel. It was short-ish though.
(Chapter Nineteen) Revelation at Yazuac
Eragon is worried about whether they are going the right way. Brom is not.
They decide Saphira should wait for them in a spot outside of town. This is the first of many times she will be asked to do this, and even this first time annoys and worries Saphira.
They are smart enough to avoid the main entrance to the town.
The pile of bodies. Chris’s description is sickening. It reminds me of the opening to The Lost World. I don’t think Harry Potter has any scenes this disturbing. At least it is brief and not unnecessary.
Again, death is a theme, a big one that plays out through the series.
Eragon shoots the crow that is about to eat…then he throws up. This is actually probably very realistic.
The Urgals are set up for us to hate them. We will later learn this was Durza’s doing, but for the time being we are being guided to hate the Urgals.
There are still Urgals there. We aren’t told how Brom knows, but it is probably his mind powers. Why didn’t he know sooner?
Shit goes mad sideways bro.
Eragon gets cornered.
There is a paragraph about Eragon’s emotions building. We will later understand that he is summoning magic.
Eragon shoots and says “Brisingr”, and with it, works his first magic.
The magic drains Eragon according to Chris’s magic rules that we don’t yet know.
Eragon wins, he lives, he learns.
(Chapter Twenty) Admonishments
Saphira shows up after the action, Furious.
After they leave, Eragon realizes that he did magic.
Apparently magic is not a known trait of the riders, at least among humans, despite it being one. I feel like by the end of the series everybody knows, at least they all know Eragon and Murtagh can do magic.
Brom is against Eragon learning magic…Why is that? It seems like Brom is purposefully restricting Eragon in any way he can think of, right up to his death… While at the same time teaching him…
Brom briefly describes the ancient language and more of the magic rules Chris has devised.
They discover that Brom can use magic.
Brom says “…I am not a Rider.” This throws us off his scent. He actually was a rider though, and we will find that out later. Man, the more I dissect Brom the more I dislike him. I used to like him a lot, but now I just feel like he is kind of a loner dick who doesn’t trust anybody.
Huh. The word Rider was capitalized… I suppose it is a proper noun?
“We are becoming more powerful, Eragon, both of us. Soon no one will be able to stand in our way.” “Yes, but which way shall we choose?” By the end of book four, this will be so true. Also, they struggle the entire series to find the right way. Foreshadowing.
(Chapter Twenty-One) Magic is the Simplest Thing
Brom points out how odd it was for Urgals to gather. We will learn why at the end of the book - foreshadowing.
“Loud birds darted around them.” This be a setup for later in the chapter.
Brom is explaining the world to us again. Chris uses Brom a lot to “info dump.” I don’t feel like it is really an info dump, because it has real context and need inside the world, but at the same time it is…
Brom tells Eragon he is the youngest rider to use magic as he did on the Urgals. Another proof of Eragon’s natural skills..
The way Brom describes the training of riders to use magic seems illogical to me…and dangerous.
Eragon asks, “Does this language have a name?” To which Brom replies, “Yes, but no one knows it. It would be a word of incredible power, something by which you could control the entire language and those who use it.” This is a major plot point, and is essential to how the tetralogy ends. I LOVE it when authors do this! The end of the series is set up in the First book.
Brom calls the bird to him using the ancient language. See? I told you the bird thing was a setup for later.
Brom continues to explain the rules.
Brom explains how the elves don’t lie, but that just makes them better at it. Of course I am paraphrasing a bit, but I really love this idea. Their inability to tell lies makes them so much more proficient with their language.
Brom explains true names. This is another major plot point, especially in books 3 and 4.
Eragon asks how to find one’s true name. Again, Huge plot point in book 4.
Eragon asks about bringing people back from the dead, and Brom explains why it should never be attempted. I feel like Chris almost had to put this in here, because otherwise you know darn well that Eragon would have tried to revive Brom, if not in this book then in the fourth one after he learns the word.
It feels like every so often we get an “info dump” chapter amidst action chapters.
Brom gives Eragon his first magic lesson: the stone. I like how this comes back with Roran later, and I like that who Roran is prevents him from getting very far at all.
Again, there is funny stuff sprinkled in. I like it. I am actually pretty funny myself. Don’t ask my wife about it though, she is immune to it now.
Eragon succeeds with the stone on his second attempt, not spectacularly though. It is still impressive given what Brom said though.
Brom straight up lies to Eragon, AGAIN. Eragon asks if Brom has a mark, says no.
Brom begins to teach Eragon the ancient language after making Eragon practice with the stone for hours. That seems like a long time, but really they don’t have anything better to do.
Brom’s right arm is injured, so he spars with his left, and he is just as good. This be foreshadowing friends. A very similar thing will happen to Eragon, forcing him to become proficient with his left hand.
Time… I have always felt, but have only now in this project admitted “aloud” that the time flow in this first book seems awkward. Chris passes time in 3 paragraphs where Eragon gains skill and strength that, as described, would take, in my mind, weeks, if not more. Same with how Saphira’s growth is described. All this in a span that, according to the map, is the same-ish distance from Yazuac as Therinsford is from Carvahall… It just doesn’t all fit together right in my mind. I feel like I don’t get quite such a feeling of this in the other books as I do in this one. Perhaps it is because of how young Chris was, perhaps it is just me. Regardless, I don’t get this feeling with Harry Potter. I am not sure if I noticed this on my first read, and it is not a huge thing even on subsequent reads. It is just a thing I needed to express.
Ha, Saphira won’t cover her scales. How dragony of her, as we will learn throughout the series. This is another example of how Chris knew how dragons are and how they behave before writing, so that he can be consistent with these things and have the readers start to learn right away, even if nobody has told them.
Eragon has a non-premonition dream. Is it just to throw us off the scent of the real ones?
(Chapter Twenty-Two) Daret
As they enter Daret it is empty much like it was when they entered Yazuac…kind of suspenseful.
Brom didn’t like the feel, but they are trapped just as he decides to leave.
We see Eragon’s inexperience with magic here. “I’ll have to stop the arrows.” We don’t yet know that this is inexperience talking, but I believe it was intentional on Chris’s part. It is also a reinforcement of the previous chapters notes…and does he really think he has gotten that proficient with magic just between the two towns? Has he actually?
Brom is very calm.
They deliver the news of Yazuac to Daret.
Brom says it was nearly a fortnight since Yazuac, so 14 ish days… I guess if Eragon had been practicing a lot he could have gotten decent at magic in that span of time.
Brom suggests that the people of Daret leave, but the man speaking on behalf of Daret says the townspeople don’t want to leave their home. This is a major parallel to Roran and Carvahall in book two.
In such a state, would they really have sold supplies to strangers?
The Daret man wishes Brom to tell the king of their plight when they reach Dras Leona. What a fool.
Brom says, “May your swords stay sharp.” I really like this. Why? Chris invented his own cool way to say goodbye, and he uses it all the time. Perhaps I shall create my own cool way to say farewell.
Saphira is angry about Eragon getting into trouble when she is not with him.
The traders did warn that all of this was happening, but nobody seemed to listen. The whole bit with the traders foreshadowed this.
Brom points out the strangeness that Urgals are attacking towns, attacking the empire, but no soldiers have been dispatched to help, as if the king doesn’t care to defend his land or people.
Brom berates Eragon for not sensing the people’s intentions using his mind powers. It is so tempting to call them jedi mind tricks.
Brom says that one could spend the day reading animals’ thoughts. He basically describes what Oromis makes him do later on in training. I love this kind of foreshadowing. Book one foreshadowing book 3 or 4.
Brom suggests starting with a cat. Says they have unusual personalities. MAJOR foreshadowing brah!
This chapter’s intent, I believe, is to world build the rules and implications of mind reading.
I realized while analyzing this chapter that Chris uses situations and/or chapters to explain chunks of this world and its rules. This chapter would be “magic” and past ones would be “dragons” and “riders”.
Brom describes how to block others from your mind. This is obviously important later.
Brom also describes how hard it is to block people from your mind. This will help us be more impressed with Murtagh later.
Saphira is FURIOUS about Eragon getting into trouble without her. This will be a recurring thing, although she grows to trust him and handle it better.
Saphira demands that Eragon rides her the next day. Eragon is still gunshy about it.
The logic from Saphira and Brom, as well as the rationalizing by all three, is stupendous here. I won’t quote it all, but it is on page 158 if you want to read it.
Chris’s writing abilities, and his mind in general, make up big time for any issues I might have with his timing and distance. Still not sure if that is just me though…
Here we see some character growth. Eragon breaks the stick he uses to train swordplay with Brom. We are shown how far he has come and now they move to the next level-real swords.
Swordplay is another theme in this series, mostly Eragon’s arc with swordplay, talent, complacency, and relearning. All of it. It is a much bigger part than I realized until this project. It is also important given the amount of battle he does. It also laces into other themes, like his feelings for Arya, and needing a sword, the werecat prophecy, and by extension, the Rock of Kuthian.
Brom and Eragon begin to duel with real swords, blunted with magic of course.
Um… “Sparks flew off his blade…” I’m sorry Chris…this doesn’t happen…I love you though.
Eragon notes how Zaroc feels heavier and slower than the sticks.
Again, at the end of this chapter I feel like Chris has thought it all through, despite the spark thing ;)
“He marveled that Zaroc had not been scratched or dented…” We will learn more about this in book tres.
Chris keeps showing us these duels and the gradual improvement. So, we do not have a giant leap in skill, at least with swordplay. These brief scenes make a natural and real arc for us, we see the arc, it is fluid and not jerky.
(Chapter Twenty-Three) Through a Dragon’s Eye
Eragon’s first planned flight. We see his unease during preparation.
We see Saphira’s growth in the description of her flight.
Once Eragon is more comfortable, Saphira pulls his consciousness into herself, so he can see as if he is her.
Now Eragon understands how Saphira feels flying. This is interesting, since this never happens again between the two in the entire rest of the series.
This part reminds me of the ONI recordings in Ready Player Two. A way to truely understand what and how someone feels. If only…
Eragon’s trepidation was for naught. He loved flying.
Eragon panicked when he felt another mind touch his. It turned out to be Brom.
This magic and mind reading is a convenient way to have long distance communication in a world with no technological way to do it.
The Letherblaka left gouges when they took off. I am glad that Chris thought of this, it is more evidence of how well he thought this all through.
We don’t know yet about the Lethrblaka, even Brom doesn’t…or at least that is what he said.
This bit extends the story, the chase. Had they caught up, I fear Eragon would have died.
Hunting the Ra’zac is Eragon’s current purpose. He doesn’t know what he will do if he can’t continue. This really shows his age, maturity, knowledge and ignorance.
When all seems lost, Eragon finds the flask. He is smart enough to drip it onto his finger rather than to try a sip.
Eragon realizes that this is what they used on Garrow.
Eragon comes up with tracking the oil shipments to find the Ra’zac…how did Chris think of this?
Jeod is mentioned by Brom, and that he may be able to help.
Another duel between Brom and Eragon. 2 short sentences, one paragraph. How many sword fights do we read about? It is a nice gradual way to show change.
(Chapter Twenty-Four) A Song for the Road
Brom chants an elvish song for Eragon.
There is a travel…um… montage? Time cut? Anyway, days are sentences. This is a good tactic that I must remember. Speed past the boredom. People don’t want to read books to be bored.
Their daily rituals and some personal growth are summed up in a paragraph or two.
Brom explains how Teirm has never fallen, its soldiers never defeated. Next book, Roran kind of defeats them…
They make a plan for Teirm.
(Chapter Twenty-Five) A Taste of Teirm
Ew…A taste of Teirm? I would never lick a city.
Chris lists enough days and time spans to maybe piece together the time frame. I still feel that Eragon changes very quickly. How quickly can a man change under those circumstances?
Chris describes what Teirm looks like.
Saphira, again, is sour about them going into the city without her.
They go to the green chestnut - Roran will go here later, in book 2. And again, I love these little things.
I feel like sometimes Chris does tell, then show, or show then tell.
The bartender tries to scam them, but a patron butts in. This shows the character of the city. It reminds me of the city of thieves from Adventure time.
The patron (Martin) says Jeod lives next to Angela the herbalist. Of course, she is very important.
We learn that the Urgals have left the area, and have not been seen in a year. So why is the city distressed?
What takes out all of the rebel ships??? I feel like we never learn about that!
They head to the nicer end of town to find Jeod, and Eragon feels out of place. This reinforces who Eragon is.
(Chapter Twenty-Six) An Old Friend
The herbalist’s shop is mentioned, and then we meet Angela! As stated above, she be important in this series… Annnddd ottthhhers???
Brom is amused by Angela’s literal interpretation of their questions.
I find it hard to believe that Angela and Brom don’t recognize/know each other.
The frog/toad thing. This is great. It is like the argument you had with your sibling when you were six, and since you just began wondering about things for yourself, you thought that you were the most clever philosopher on the planet, despite not knowing that word.
I like Angela’s character. She seems like a crackpot, but she’s the furthest thing from it.
Eragon is impatient. This shows us a bit more about his level of maturity.
We meet Jeod’s wife. She has a strong will, we can see that. We will get the side tale of Jeod and his wife in little bits through the series.
And we get to meet Jeod.
Jeod’s reaction and Brom’s counter reaction show us that something has happened int heir past, something important.
Eragon is eager to learn of Brom’s past.
“And you look the same as you did twenty years ago.” Jeod says this. It is another hint at Brom being a rider. It is a hint that I doubt I picked up the first, maybe even second, time I read it.
Brom gives us some new info, but only enough to stoke our curiosity. He generates more questions than answers. Eragon is enraged by this.
Eragon uses magic to eavesdrop. This seems dangerous to me. I guess it is dangerous, and he is still naive so he doesn’t know how stupid he is. Also, this is the first we have seen him use magic since the beginning of his training. He is a bit cocky, and he literally refers to his success with the brisingr incident.
Why did Brom and Jeod feel comfortable talking about sensitive information in a place where this newb-ass kid is able to eavesdrop on them? They should know better.
We learn more about Jeod.
Brom mentions finding the passage, which is significant again in book 3 or 4, I forget which.
Ajihad is mentioned. Foreshadowing.
There are a lot of important words mentioned, like Tronjheim.
Jeod isn’t convinced it’s the empire disappearing his ships. Do we ever find out what causes this???
Brom is afraid of getting Eragon into the politics. He says everyone would try to influence him. Brom is right, and they all do try.
This eavesdropped conversation adds even more questions. Many, many threads let out that will get answered throughout the series.
Brom sends his ring to Ajihad for proof that it is him. This ring is a somewhat important plot point.
OMG…before Eragon began eavesdropping, Brom must have told Jeod that Eragon is his son. We see a hint of it here, but you would never know on a first read.
Eragon asks himself all the big questions that Chris has to answer. It is almost like you can see inside Chris’s brain with this.
The Eragon getting stuck on the cliff scene seems unnecessary. Or maybe it is an analogy of later things? That he can’t do it alone?
Saphira is still bitter about being left out of the city. Can you blame her?
We see Jeod’s lavish house as Eragon enters.
Jeod jokes that after seeing Dras Leona, Gil’ead, or Kuasta, Tierm won’t seem so big. Foreshadowing.
Eragon confesses that he doesn’t know how to read, then learns that Garrow knew how to read but never taught him.
Brom adds reading to the list of things to teach Eragon.
Bored, Eragon skims the shelves and finds Domia Abr Wyrda. This book comes back in book 3 or 4…forget which.
We learn that the above mentioned book is contraband.
Eragon asks about using magic to search the records and Brom explains scrying, which is very important in the series.
Brom is like our google. He gives us all the answers we need, teaches us along side Eragon. Much of the world is built through him.
Brom explains the rules of scrying. Magic has its rules, its limits, and it needs them.
Eragon wonders if he could use magic to affect something leagues away that he is scrying, completely forgetting Brom’s rule about magic and distance. Later, his forgetting this almost costs him is life. This is a tad bit of foreshadowing.
Brom teaches Eragon the words to scry, trusting him not to use them.
Eragon voices his worry for Roran, and Brom agrees that the Ra’zac may go after him rather than lie and say that there is nothing to worry about.
Brom says it is highly possible that the Ra’zac will go back to interrogate Roran. Foreshadowing book two.
Brom forces Eragon to use logic about Roran’s situation.
Brom says the solution is for Roran to learn to defend himself. Again, foreshadowing book two.
It is almost as if Chris keeps telling what is going to happen, but it is subtle enough and in a way that we almost don’t realize it. Like he uses these moments to shepherd our thoughts in the direction he wants. It is almost like the manipulation of marketing. Subtle, but firm and real. He also uses these moments to explain his reasoning, to answer any questions we may have well before we have any cause to ask them. So we are all primed for Roran to defend himself now, the rational was planted in our heads way before we needed it. Like the return vehicle sent to Mars well before the crew gets there. It makes the story more believable since we have logical explanations planted in our subconscious before we need them.
Brom reminds Eragon that he left Roran a note. This is a call back and foreshadowing.
Chris even rationalizes why the king won’t kill Roran. Chris had all his reasons planned out and delivered them through Brom. This again shows how much Chris “over” thought about every little detail. You can see him answer all of the questions he asked himself, or thought haters or critics would ask.
Brom poses the big, end of series question, “…are you willing to die for what you believe in?” Then he lays down some wisdom, “ The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in.
(Chapter Twenty-Seven) The Witch and the Werecat
Eragon sees his reflection in the mirror and notes how he has changed.
“…an unusual place for a store…” Just as its owner.
Eragon enters the shop. This is an important moment.
We get two paragraphs of description as Eragon makes his way to the counter. As he makes his way to the counter! This is important! The story is still moving forward AND we get descriptions. The story doesn’t stop just to describe things. Based on what I have learned, I feel like adding smells and maybe even sounds here would have helped Chris out.
We meet Solembum! He is an important player in this series.
Eragon curiously reaches his mind out to the cat. Chris doesn’t mention it here, but Brom had suggested doing this with cats earlier.
Eragon doesn’t realize it is the cat talking to him.
Angela walks in as Eragon is about to leave, only moments from changing the course of the story.
Angela says only three others have ever been talked to by Solembum. Are these other story threads, openings that Chris left himself?
Angela offers to tell his fortune.
Angela reveals that one of the other three was named Selena, and that she was the only one to accept her offer.
Eragon comments that Angela isn’t that old to have memory problems. In response, Angela hints that she is older than she looks. This is not the first time this is alluded to, or the last.
Eragon decided to have his fortune only because his mother was strong enough to do it.
Angela can’t clearly see Eragon’s fortune.
A long life is forecast. If she is to be trusted by the reader, we should know he survives everything that is about to come at him, even the final battle, even when all seems lost.
Just like Brom said earlier, Angela gives a prediction that others will seek to control ERagon.
Angela says he is free to choose his future, which leaves Chris much room for freedom to write later on, unlike his prophetic dream.
Angela also forecasts a death in his future…We will later know this to be Brom.
Angela forecasts that he will leave this land forever. While this is very open to interpretation, it still painted Chris into a bit of a corner, or at least appears to have.
Angela foretells of an epic romance, with one of noble birth and heritage. Again, no names here, but yea, its Arya.
Angela foretells of betrayal from within his family. This is a clever bit. The only family we know Eragon has is Roran, and he is in a prime place to betray Eragon, especially since we don’t yet know exactly how loyal Roran is. Of course it ends up being Murtagh. But even then, it wasn’t betrayal by free will. This is probably the best part of the fortune telling in my opinion.
Again, Chis tells us exactly what will happen, just without enough detail to spoil it, only enough to raise more curiosity, questions, suspense.
We see Chris constantly foreshadowing things, and to great effect. He basically tells us right here what is about to happen, but it in no way takes away from the story! Learn this foreshadowing skill and use it!
“I am Eragon.” “Is that who you are or your name?” “Both.” So, so, so good. Because he is the first rider. So good.
Why does Eragon decide to be honest with Angela? About who they are? It is pretty risky.
Angela knows of Brom, just apparently didn’t recognize him or maybe hadn’t met him yet.
We get the wisdom form Solembum that spans the whole series. The information known to all werecats that is a major plot point in books 3 and 4. Man I love it when authors set books three and four up in book one! Really gets my motor running, ya know what I mean?!
Saphira advises him to remember what the werecat told him. She says the names felt powerful, “Kuthian, she said, rolling the word around.” Oh yeah. This may not prove to what extent Chris had outlined the whole series before writing this book, but it shows that he set himself up good.
Brom says he will teach Eragon to read over the next week…is this possible? I am genuinely curious. Obviously it wouldn’t be full comprehension, but basics?
Helen’s character gets painted in a bit.
(Chapter Twenty-Eight) Of Reading and Plots
Eragon starts to learn letters, starting with A. Good place to start if you ask me.
We are shown more of Brom and Jeod keeping secrets from Eragon. Shown, not told.
Eragon doesn’t exactly want to leave Teirm, on account of life gaining some normalcy. I feel like this wouldn’t have lasted long for him.
Eragon has his first vision of “the woman” who we later learn to be Arya. This is important, and not fully explained until the end of the series.
(Chapter Twenty-Nine) Thieves in the Castle
Eragon still doesn’t want to carry his sword, despite being rather proficient with it at this point. Perhaps he is afraid of what carrying a sword means.
Solembum appears in boy form. This is how we learn what a werecat actually is. Shown, not told.
Solembum warns them about guards coming to find them, another display that shows Solembum likes Eragon for some reason.
They barely escape the room before the guards find them. Suspense.
The soldiers escort them out. They helped them escape. This is convenient, but in no way forced.
When they get out, Eragon celebrates with a grin and a jump, presumably Breakfast Club style. Brom berates him. You can see Eragon’s inexperience and immaturity in his actions. This and his grip tightening on his bow earlier. Brom and Jeod are more cool and collected, this is nothing new to them.
Eragon believes the height of the Beor mountains on the map to be an exaggeration. This will be important later. More foreshadowing.
“…empty shell haunted by strange beasts.” This is in reference to Vroengard, and foreshadowing for book four.
Chris does a lot of reasoning with his characters. We have like two whole pages of thought as to the whereabouts of the Ra’zac.
(Chapter Thirty) A Costly Mistake
Eragon feigns ignorance to get information about werecats out of Brom.
The crew gets back on the move.
Eragon directly questions Brom about his past, and calls notice to the “coincidence” that he lived in Carvahall and knew so much about dragons. Smart kid.
Brom reveals that Eragon is at the center of a power struggle between the empire and the Varden.
Brom admits to lying about the dragons and reveals that Galbatorix still has two eggs.
Eragon realizes the king may soon have two new dragon riders. Foreshadowing book two son.
Brom reveals how he met Jeod and that he knows the Varden. Of course, we will later learn that he helped start the Varden.
Brom reveals that he slew Morzan for the egg and hid in Carvahall.
Brom reveals no more information, despite how much there is. It is funny how since he is telling a little bit of the truth, Eragon and the readers don’t stop to think that maybe he only told a little bit of the truth, that maybe Brom is still hiding something.
We learn that if not for Sloan, the Ra’zac may have never learned of Eragon.
Brom explains why he won’t bring Eragon to the Varden yet, and that he has only three options after killing the Ra’zac (or even if he doesn’t kill them, which he doesn’t…); Join the Varden, flee to Surda, or join the King.
Brom speaks kindly of Eragon’s mother and says he knew her well enough to miss her when she was gone. Damn straight he did. What a complicated relationship that must have been.
Eragon breaks his wrist falling. This is a setup for him to learn to sword fight with his non dominant hand.
They flee camp on account of the Urgal print that Eragon broke his wrist trying to see.
Eragon convinces Saphira to land on the road in front of the Urgals chasing Brom, without telling her what his plan is.
Rather than run, which is what Eragon probably expected to happen, the Urgals explain that their master wants to speak with Eragon and Saphira.
“Eragon wondered who had the power to bring the Urgals together under one banner.” I think this is the second or third time this is mentioned. It is a major plot point of this book, and the effects of it carry through the series. This is some heavy handed foreshadowing brah.
Eragon stupidly launches the twelve Urgals with magic, and as a result is rendered unconscious and nearly dead. Chris does a great job showing Eragon’s journey through learning magic. What new student wouldn’t forget important rules or act recklessly?
(Chapter Thirty-One) Vision of Perfection
Eragon awakes alone, and after hours pass he finds a pool of water and decides to try scrying.
“Eragon tiredly let the image fade.” So he does use adverbs! It stuck out like a sore thumb, I can see why many avoid them as a standard.
Eragon scrys Roran, but sees him sitting on an invisible chair with no surroundings…Where is Roran? It must be about a month or two after Eragon left, wouldn’t he be in Carvahall where Eragon would recognize the surroundings?
Eragon, very stupidly, decides to scry an image from a dream…Arya. I mean, if I was a sixteen year old kid with magic I would also spend my alone time scrying the attractive elf maiden tied to a bed, wouldn’t you? Can’t blame the guy.
Eragon succeeds in scrying Arya. This is a bit important later.
Brom reprimands Eragon for his magic use on the Urgals.
Eragon confesses that he didn’t want to kill the Urgals, that it seemed extreme. He will struggle with this throughout the series, not even wanting to kill the King. This is why Eragon didn’t want to wear his sword, even after becoming proficient with it. Good job showing not telling Chris!
“…is who this Urgal leader is.” Again, Brom brings this up.
If this title didn’t tell you how Eragon feels about Arya…well, if it didn’t then you are thick.
(Chapter Thirty-Two) Master of the Blade
Eragon tells Brom about scrying Arya. Brom is puzzled by this. We get some very very subtle foreshadowing about book 4 and the Eldunari.
Eragon gets laughed off when he suggests they search every prison they pass to find this mysterious woman. Funny enough, once Brom is out of the picture he will do just that.
We cover weeks in a paragraph, and in that time Eragon becomes proficient in swordplay with his left hand.
“…spring had crept over Alegasia.” Hmm…I need to talk to Chris, like real bro talk with trust that his words are between me and him and get to the bottom of the time frame business, solely for my own benefit.
They reach Leona lake at night, and we get a few nice descriptions.
We get a scene of Eragon and Saphira swimming.
Chris throws this in, “He pulled at his splint - his wrist itched.” The only purpose of this sentence as far as I can tell is to remind us that Eragon still has a splint on.
Eragon bests Brom in their nightly fight, and Brom says that Eragon is a rare and talented swordsman. This ties into that recurring theme of Eragon’s swordplay and his journey with it.
Brom cautions about sword fighting elves, to which Eragon asks if there is any way to become their equal. Double Foreshadowing!!!
Brom, as Brom does, explains how to fight with magic and the rules of a wizard duel. This is all prompted by another of Eragon’s questions.
Brom mentions multiple times about how Eragon asks so many questions. Is this Chris joking? Like, almost breaking the fourth wall? A wink and a nod?
Brom’s advice to ERragon if faced with a wizard’s duel is to turn and run…that seems like shitty advice…
(Chapter Thirty-Three) The Mire of Dras-Leona
Saphira asks Eragon to follow Brom’s lead when they reach Dras-Leona.
Eragon still doesn’t know what he should do after killing the Ra’zac and thinks there will be time to decide after. Saphira isn’t so sure. I am glad that Chris is making Eragon worry about this. This would be a very real, very normal thing for a human in Eragon’s position to be worrying about, especially because he actually thinks that he is going to be able to accomplish this and soon. This is like when Roran, Garrow, and Eragon all had these worries and plans right up until their wold got flipped. It makes the world and the people in it feel so real.
We get a brief description of Dras-Leona compared to Teirm and Helgrind.
Brom gives a brief description of the worshipers of Helgrind. Little do we know, we will get quite a close look at them in books to come.
Dras-Leona is much…worse… than Teirm.
Eragon drinks before bed. I feel like this is foolish of both Eragon and Brom. Aren’t we all sometimes though?
(Chapter Thirty-Four) Trail of Oil
Eragon has a hangover.
They begin to track the oil and we see more of the city.
Brom decides they should split up. I get the feeling that Brom only does this to get some alone time, maybe so he can do something he can’t with Eragon around. I think I feel this way because it doesn’t make sense for them to split up safety wise.
Eragon found the warehouse and Brom heard that Galbatorix will be visiting the city within the week, which would be the first time the kind left the capitol in over ten years. We will learn later why.
Eragon voices that he wants the Ra’zac, but not if it means fighting the King, which Brom seems pleased to hear.
Brom also found the warehouse that Eragon did, as well as much more.
Eragon gets snapped at for interrupting. This reinforces both characters.
Brom found that the oil was brought to Helgrind.
We learn that despite the riders demolishing the slave trade, it has since flourished under Galbatorix.
They devise a plan to get at the Ra’zac…I question why Brom goes along with this, he knows how dangerous the Ra’zac are, especially at night. I can only assume that he had an ace up his sleeve, something he assumed made them more likely to win. I do trust that Chris has explanations for all of the things I question.
Eragon “can’t believe” they actually found the Ra’zac.
Brom says, “[blah blah blah, after kill Ra’zac] what comes after that will be up to you.” To which Eragon says, “When we’re done here, maybe we could visit Carvahall.” HA! Saphira points out the flaws in that.
(Chapter Thirty-Five) Worshipers of Helgrind
Brom left Eragon a note on the wall with charcoal stick…based on experience, I don’t feel like that would have cleaned off easily, BUT, this would not have happened at all if Eragon hadn’t learned to read. So I think Chris is trying to show us how much Eragon has learned.
“I wish I didn’t have to go armed all the time.” I might have laughed out loud a bit when I read this. It is very funny foreshadowing.
“…newly liberated from his splint…” Chris slips this in to tell us that his wrist is healed.
Eragon almost does something stupid, freeing a slave, but catches himself.
At this point I started noticing a lot of adverbs, but they mostly seem to work… This reminds me of something. When asking questions it is best to ask open ended questions, ones that do not have a binary answer like yes and no. There are some questions that seem impossible to phrase open ended, but then a real pro can do it without an issue. So I feel like maybe adverbs are OK, but a real pro would have no issue avoiding them.
Eragon enters the cathedral. He will return later in the series.
The Ra’zac are there. Brom is trying to figure out a way to infiltrate their lair, and they just show up right behind Eragon.
Eragon, smartly, flees instead of fighting the Ra’zac. I feel like this decision shows his maturing. It would be so difficult to make the right move in a situation like this where you don’t have time to think it through, and the fact that his instincts led him the right way shows that his training is paying off.
Eragon has Saphira tell Brom to meet him at the inn, and they leave as quick as possible. I found this scene so well written that even on the thousandth time reading it I was caught up in it, reading just to see what happens.
As they approach the gates, they are half closed and closing and guarded. Brom says he will handle the men and Eragon must handle the door. Brom holds up his end of the deal, and as Eragon uses magic to halt the gate, he shouts the words in the ancient language…Why on Earth…sorry…Why in Alegasia would he shout them?!
Brom is no longer worried about Saphira being seen.
Saphira warns that things will be harder now since that escape was so “unobtrusive.”
They make camp in the dark, no fire, no pipe.
Eragon thinks he sees movement in the dark…then he is knocked unconscious.
(Chapter Thirty-Six) The Ra’zac’s Revenge
Hmm…Revenge of what?
This chapter starts with Eragon regaining consciousness, tied up.
The Ra’zac drugged Eragon so he couldn’t use magic. I feel like this is really clever on Chris’s part, since Eragon could have easily escaped with magic. Without things like this drug, magic users would be kinda OP. Lesser beings would have no chance. Even Superman has Kryptonite.
Why did the Ra’zac have a lantern? Don’t they see in the dark, or am I remembering incorrectly?
“…from the unseen attackers…” I like this. Chris used the word attackers, because that is what the characters in the scene believe it to be, more than one person, but in reality it is just Murtagh.
Brom dives in front of a dagger thrown at Eragon. Classic.
We end with Eragon unconscious again.
This was a short, but brutal and important chapter/scene.
(Chapter Thirty-Seven) Murtagh
Well, we meet Murtagh. He will prove to be a key character in this series. I remember Chris saying in an interview or something that set out to make this story about three brothers. I never would have known that without him saying so, but now that I know it is all I can see. I do love how complex Chris made this family.
Eragon is thinking surprisingly clear considering being knocked out twice.
The hand-and-a-half sword is mentioned, which is the fist descriptive sentence we get. This sword will have significance.
Murtagh’s first words are to say he is an enemy of the Ra’zac and was tracking them. Just like Eragon was! OMG!
Eragon has to tell Saphira to let Murtagh help him.
Eragon and Saphira do their first healing ever, on Brom.
“Together we can cast spells that are beyond either of us.” Foreshadowing. This is how they end up defeating Galbatorix, albeit with the help of a bunch of others as well.
Eragon gets Zarroc out after Murtagh leaves to make a litter for Brom. Murtagh doesn’t notice it when he gets back.
Eragon thanks Murtagh and suggests he leaves or else he will be in danger. Murtagh declines the offer to leave so he can help them. He also wants another shot at the Ra’zac and figures it might happen if he stays with them. He should have left man.
They stop at the sandstone hill.
Saphira found a cave that can’t be seen from the ground, but then proceeds to crawl/claw her way up to it…wouldn’t that leave a trail that others could follow?
(Chapter Thirty-Eight) Legacy of a Rider
Saphira wakes up Eragon because Brom is thrashing around.
Brom suddenly wakes up and demands the wineskin.
Brom instructs Eragon to wash his hand with the wine while he fights off Eragon’s questions.
Brom’s Gedwey Ignasia is revealed.
Brom drops some bombs about Morzan and his own Saphira.
He implores Eragon to protect Saphira with his life, lest he be doomed to the same fate.
Brom gives Eragon his blessing and seven more ancient language words. We never learn what these words are…
Brom dies. The firs fulfillment of Angela’s fortune.
They carry him to the top of the sandstone hill and bury him.
Eragon uses magic to bury Brom.
“And like a father to me.” This is some big time foreshadowing about a huge plot point.
Eragon “dreams” about the “imprisoned woman” again.
(Chapter Thirty-Nine) Diamond Tomb
Eragon realizes that Angela was correct.
We learn that Murtagh was hoping to learn if the rumors of a rider were true by tracking the Ra’zac.
Eragon remembers Brom reading the man’s intentions in Daret and tries with Murtagh. Eragon fails, Murtagh knows how to protect his mind. This is the second little bit Chris added to foreshadow both the twins attacking Murtagh’s mind, as well as Galbatorix.
Apparently Murtagh hasn’t noticed Zarroc yet…
Eragon puts on Zarroc and decides to “live by the sword.” This is a bit of a turning point for him, and one he will not be able to reverse int his quadrilogy.
Murtagh finally notices Zarroc and merely points out that it was once as known as its owner, Morzan. Eragon didn’t know it was Morzan’s sword until now, and Murtagh doesn’t let on how or what he knows.
Chris very subtly indicates, indirectly, that the sword put Murtagh in a bad mood for a bit. Good job Chris.
Saphira admits that she knew Brom was a rider all along. When asked why she kept it a secret, she said that Brom asked her to.
Brom also told Saphira how to reach the Varden. Now Eragon is angry about Brom telling her a bunch of secrets and her keeping them from him. Little does he know…she has more…
Saphira placates him with kind words from Brom.
The contact Brom gave Saphira for finding the Varden is in Gil’ead. This is what leads Eragon, accidentally, to Arya. This is an example of what some writers believe, that the plot, the world, the protagonist, all rely on each other. You can’t have one without the others. I also believe this for the most part.
The next paragraph Eragon tells Saphira of this “dream” and worries that the woman is running out of time and that he doesn’t know how or where to find her. By now readers must know this is a major plot point.
Now Murtagh tells Eragon that he will leave them once they head for the Varden, after Gil’ead, as it is equally as dangerous for him as the Empire. This is the beginning of an important thread in this book.
Chris’s chapter titles give away what will happen in each chapter, at least in part or a clue.
Saphira turns Brom’s tomb to diamond. How/why did Chris come up with this? It is good, unexpected, but not too much.
(Chapter Forty) Capture at Gil’ead
Eragon and Murtagh discover that they have a lot in common, but avoid discussing their pasts.
A week passes - no sign of the Ra’zac and no dreams of Arya.
As they pass villages and towns, Eragon disguises himself and searches the jails, finding nothing. Remember earlier when Brom laughed him off about this? Well…now he is doing it.
Eragon sees “wanted posters” about himself.
Eragon is now 16 and Saphira is 6 months old.
Eragon’s ribs are now healed from the Ra’zac attack.
There is always hesitation when one of the two asks for the other’s sword. It is a glimpse into who they are.
The two spar, finding that they are as much equals in swordplay as possible.
Murtagh, who was trained his whole life by instructors, admits that Eragon is the best he has ever sparred. Eragon, a boy who not six months earlier had never touched a sword. This reinforces the “natural talent” aspect of Eragon’s swordsmanship. I think that had Chris not written this just so, it would have been hard for the readers to stomach. He does seem to pull it off though.
Eragon begins practicing magic again.
Half a chapter builds the Eragon/Murtagh relationship and brings us to Gil’ead. Chris says this is nearly a month in this half a chapter.
Chris mentions in that time that “spring had finally nudged away the remnants of winter.” So Chris does track the seasons, at least this far. It still seems disproportionate to me, since Saphira hatched 6-7 months ago and that was in winter. And spring is just now here in full? It also seems like through the series we never get back to winter despite it feeling like we should. It is possible that seasons work different in Alegasia, but if this is the case, it is never brought to light in a straightforward way.
Murtagh, using logic, convinces Eragon that he should search for the contact in Gil’ead instead of Eragon.
We never hear what is to be told to the contact so that he will believe Brom sent them, only that Saphira passes it along to Murtagh. This is actually good writing. We do not need to know, so why waste our time? It really isn’t important. Learn from this.
After hours pass, Murtagh rides hard out of Gil’ead, and when he gets to camp he asks if anybody followed him after drawing his sword…Then he asks to eat without explaining…Eragon is far more patient about this than I would be.
Murtagh reminds Eragon that he will not accompany him, which Eragon is sad about. This is the second of many times this comes up.
Eragon awakes to a tingly hand and a feeling of unease. Saphira smells horses.
The trio prepare for bad things to happen.
They are attacked by Urgals, and again, sigh, Eragon is knocked unconscious. That seems to happen to him a lot. This is another spot where I feel like Chris is dancing on a fine like of what a reader will stomach. He already has a pretty long middle chunk of the book and then he has almost the same exact scene play out twice.
(Chapter Forty-One) Du Sundavar Freohr
Eragon wakes up in a cell, drugged again.
This drugging is convenient for Chris as well as for the story, but it also reflects reality. People always develop ways to counteract things, especially people with vast power and wealth, like the King. Make better body armor and somebody will develop a better bullet.
We can tell that Eragon is drugged through the writing without Chris just saying so.
Eragon sees Arya through the door window. The story brought them together.
It is just now revealed that the woman is an elf.
Eragon’s feelings are described. Many may recognize the description as love or lust, but neither word is used because Eragon doesn’t yet understand his feelings.
We see the shade (a.k.a Durza)
Eragon goes to sleep and wakes up with a clearer head.
Eragon realizes the drug must be in the food and water, so he decides not to eat or drink.
“The shade” comes to visit Eragon, who pretends to still be heavily drugged.
“The shade” asks for Eragon’s true name. To me, this shows how inexperienced Durza is with this. Did he really expect it to be that simple? This is also the first that we see true names being used as tools, something that will pop up again and again.
Eragon lies about his true name. Translated it means Death of the shadows, in a minor attempt to scare the shade.
“The shade” hints that he will betray the King and Eragon will have to choose who to serve between the two. I love this, the fact that this lesser, but still evil, power is planning to overthrow the main protagonist of the series, and not doing much to hide it.
The shade notices the water is not touched and questions the guard. Content in knowing the plates were scraped clean (but not knowing it was out the window), he whispers to the captain to add an extra dose to be safe.
I feel like Chris’s writing in this book is good, very good even, but maybe not great. I say that with respect oozing from my heart, and the understanding that this is an exceptional book for a teenager to have written, and knowing that he has for sure grown as a writer. That said, I feel like his success with this book was due more to his marketing and audience building than anything else. I feel that good marketing (and hard work) can support a good work and make it successful, but bad marketing can mean an unsuccessful start for great work.
Eragon is resigned to wait.
(Chapter Forty-Two) Fighting Shadows
Eragon awakes with his mind finally clear.
Eragon, smartly, unlocks the door with magic rather than knocking it down. This is a far cry from trying to throw twelve Urgals.
He realizes that he should have contacted Saphira first, then he does.
As six soldiers charge Eragon, he is saved by an old man with a bow. We are, for a moment, left to wonder if this is a new character. We of course learn that it is Murtagh.
Murtagh wants to leave but Eragon insists on saving the elf.
The elf is tensed, ready for danger, but after seeing the two collapses unconscious. Is she just too exhausted?
We get the first whiff of freshly crushed pine needles! This is an excellent use of smell, which many authors neglect. This is also a recurring thing, which I like. I also have to point out that this smell, intentional or not, is a smell that Eragon of all people would find appealing given his background. Coincidence? There are no coincidences in stories.
“She held her head high with a queen’s demeanor.” Foreshadowing.
Eragon cannot carry Arya and thus needs Murtagh’s help. This is another example of how the hero cannot succeed on their own.
Murtagh says they have to wait, but Eragon’s warning of a shade changes his mind. They are too late though, and the shade finds them.
Eragon, knowing the shade wants him alive, confronts the shade instead of Murtagh.
The roof shakes and begins to fall apart, coupled with many sounds. Obviously Saphira is tearing it apart, but that is never said outright. Good writing.
“Whatever was happening, it was getting closer.” Chris must think we don’t yet know it is Saphira. Perhaps first time readers don’t know, or maybe just Eragon doesn’t know.
The 2nd through 4th paragraphs on page 307. These paragraphs are so dramatic, almost a bit too much for me. Rather than dislike it for this though, I admire it. I cannot explain why exactly.
There is a lot of foreshadowing here. “You killed him!” “He knew of only two heroes of legend who had survived slaying a shade.” “I’m not so sure.” He is not dead, Eragon will kill him later, Arya will also kill one which makes two, he doesn’t survive killing Durza later unscathed, etc.
Eragon asks Saphira if she can carry all three of them, to which she replies, “Of course.” Not too long ago this would have been a struggle, or impossible even.
Eragon having the visions of Arya should have been impossible. This fact should raise big red flags, telling us there is something we don’t know. The Eldunari are the ones who made this happen, they are that thing we don’t know about yet, and won’t until the last book of the quadrilogy. This is some big ole foreshadowing in a tiny, almost insignificant thing that we all overlook once Arya is rescued. We almost forget about it and its impossibility, thinking that Arya’s rescue has ended it. But no! It was all pointing to something much larger!
You gotta close the little loops, tie up even the smallest loose ends. When fighting the shade, Zar’roc is knocked from Eragon’s hand. Chris made sure he picked it back up before leaving.
They flee the city. All of this just to meet Durza and free the elf. Very important, but man was it quite the detour.
(Chapter Forty-Three) A Warrior and a Healer
They land, tend to Saphira’s wounds, and leave again.
Eragon recalls that elves have long lives, but he doesn’t know how long. We will find out later when we meet Ruhnon.
Eragon wonders why an elf was in Gil’ead and how the empire captured her. This is funny to me, because she is basically responsible for this whole story.
The four stop the next day when they are too tired to continue.
Murtagh tells Eragon the Urgals and the shade are working for the empire.
Eragon realizes that the King ordered what happened at Yazuac. Perhaps this is the turning point for Eragon?
Eragon realizes too that all the Urgals were headed Southeast and wonders why the King is sending them that way. We will learn later, but right now it seems like harmless wondering…
Murtagh treats Saphira as an equal…as if he knows that she is…I suppose they did work together to get Eragon back, so perhaps he does know.
Chris describes Murtagh and Eragon’s new bond using the word brotherhood. It is obvious to me now that he did this on purpose.
Attempting to put the elf on a bed, Eragon accidentally notices her injuries.
Looking over her wounds, Eragon discovers a tattoo on her shoulder that is the same symbol as that on Brom’s ring. This is a plot point later on.
Ha, Eragon swears to kill whoever hurt Arya. He will.
We catch a glimpse of a sixteen year old boy trying not to notice a beautiful naked elf’s form. I think Chris wrote this tastefully.
Chris makes it sound as if this healing took like 6-12 hours…I feel like that is a very long time.
They leave again and Eragon sleeps in the saddle.
(Chapter Forty-Four) Water from Sand
Another, very, very subtle showing of Eragon’s young man/teenage feelings for the unconscious elf.
I feel like I have to say it again. SUBTLETY.
Saphira is confident that the elves would accept them if they could find them. This is another showing of her deep instincts.
North, South, East, and West are referenced…but never a compass?
We get more of Chris’s reasoning in a scene, where he makes the characters reason their way to a conclusion. It’s as if he knows where he wants the characters to go and he uses them to justify and reason it. It is slow, but my brain likes it, all bases are covered.
Chris uses smells to draw us in again. As stated before, many authors neglect to do this.
Chris covered his butt…Murtagh mentions how he bought supplies in Gil’ead. If Chris hadn’t done this, they would be screwed.
They discuss crossing the desert, which is the only hope they can see, and discuss the issue of water. Remember the title? I wonder what they will try…
Eragon, stupidly, tries to turn dirt into water. This is where Brom’s warnings come back to him, albeit a bit too late.
We see a twinge of homesickness in Eragon.
Eragon happens to across the answer to their problems while playing in the dirt. The answer is to pull water from deep down. This is what I like about Chris, he bases everything in reality, and he thinks of some rather clever things.
(Chapter Forty-Five) The Ramr River
At some point Chris realized the elf may get sores from riding Saphira unconscious, and he addresses this.
Sometimes I think Eragon is too smart for his own good…Main characters have to be up to the task, I know this. It would be a shit story if he was stupid and couldn’t wield a sword.
They head off into the desert.
Saphira points out that this is the third day since they rescued the elf and she still hasn’t woken up. It is good that one of the characters anchors the time, because they are all sleep deprived and would very likely have missed this fact.
The descriptions of the elf seem to come from Eragon’s subconscious, “her sculpted lips” and “her slender form”. This is of course, how one should write this kind of story, at least in my opinion.
Saphira has to carry them across the river. This reminds me of the chicken, fox and grain story.
They reach the desert.
(Chapter Forty-Six) The Hadarac Desert
Saphira loves the desert. This is something we will learn about dragons later on.
We get an update: four days since Gil’ead, 35 leagues.
Still, the elf sleeps.
Eragon pulls water up for the first time. It is hard, but he does it.
Both men get irritable.
They gain sight of the Beor mountains. I like how Chris wrote this, how they didn’t quite know what they were seeing at first. That is probably exactly what would happen. I know he did a lot of math for things like the mountain height and travel time, but I wonder if he did the math to figure out how far away you would be when you first seen the mountains taking into account the curvature of the planet and atmospheric distortion. Hmm…
“Let’s hope the animals that live there aren’t in proportion to the mountain.” HA! They are.
(Chapter Forty-Seven) A Path Revealed
As Eragon thinks, we see him begin to form reasons for opposing the empire.
While taking notes on this section, I got this weird, mental birds-eye view of reading…Humans are interesting creatures…We invent stories to tell ourselves and other people…
Eragon gets the idea to touch the elf’s mind.
For how good his reasoning is, Eragon is a dumbass. He attempts to contact the elf without first telling Saphira or Murtagh, even though I am pretty sure Brom warned him about the minds of Elves. Do all young people make the same mistakes they were warned about? If so, do the warnings help? I think they do…but it would be easier if we could just learn from the warning.
The elf mentally attacks him, and he only stops her by speaking his intent in the ancient language.
We get the first descriptions of an elf’s mind.
We finally learn the elf’s name! Arya!
We learn that Arya was poisoned and she only has three or four days left to live. The only thing keeping her from dying is staying in this sedate state. I like that, sedate state. Fun to say. I think this was clever, this sedate state keeping her alive. Good one Chris.
Arya asks a promise of secrecy from Eragon before telling him how to get to the Varden.
Murtagh is salty about something and he and Eragon fight.
Saphira stops them and forces them to talk.
Murtagh claims the Varden would never trust him. This is false…and then true…
Murtagh says, “You see, my father-” and is cut off as Saphira notices a troop of Urgals.
Eragon convinces Murtagh to come with them for a while, for his own safety…Why wouldn’t Eragon just let him go? Why didn’t Murtagh just leave?
They head off toward the Varden.
(Chapter Forty-Eight) A Clash of Wills
This title makes me imagine a throw down, in a giant arena, between all the people ever named William throughout history.
Saphira is away hunting, and the two men had stopped so the horses could drink when they became surrounded by slavers.
Eragon is a bit of a drama queen again. He is still trying to scare people off instead of fight them, despite what he had seen and felt during that slave auction. This is part of Eragon’s overall arc. He will eventually kill without considering such things in the moment.
Murtagh coldly beheads the leader, which causes a fight between the two again. But they still trust each other…like siblings...
(Chapter Forty-Nine) Flight Through the Valley
move along, nothing to see here.
(Chapter )
move along, nothing to see here.